After my scathing critique, I'm not feeling like I'm particularly skillful at anything, so I guess I'll just apply to be a straightjacket.
NAME Ceridwen
GROUP Syndrome.
SKILLS TO IMPROVE I guess, making my sentence structure more concise and better flowing? Increasing/decreasing pace as fits the situation?
AMOUNT Um, my schedule is kind of complicated, I have long segments here and there where I have nothing to do but browse the net (between classes), then days might pass where I can't get online once. I guess ideally I'd like one "surgeon" who's online pretty often but who doesn't mind if he/she has to wait a couple days for a post sometimes. On the other hand, it'd be nice to be able to play rapidly with them the few times when I do have long breaks.
ANYTHING ELSE? Whenever I'm online, I'm on AIM, and I prefer being contacted on there more than any other way, really. My name is Ceridwen Roth. I'm also new to being harshly criticized--I've never run into such demanding RPers before--so I'd appreciate sort of just playing with someone you believe to be better at forming sentences, and maybe learning from them as we go, as opposed to receiving a lengthy critique after every post.