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erato
Posted: Sep 5 2009, 06:16 PM


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introducing...
surgeons and straitjackets!


surgeons and straitjackets is a new mentoring reminiscent program offered on amputations. it's for users who would like to refine any certain skill or have a little help with getting used to a new genre or tense for role-playing. instead of going through a critique process, this is a hands-on approach where users get to help out each other. surgeons and straitjackets is also a good way to meet someone else on the site and get a solid role-play going.


HOW IT ALL WORKS


ABOUT BECOMING A SURGEON
    surgeons are the mentors in the project. if you sign up as a surgeon, you are offering to help someone in the same group as you or in a lower one with whatever you list as a strength. for example, if you are very comfortable writing in present tense and a straitjacket asks for help in that area, you'll be assigned to them. from there, you get a role-play going and discuss what your straitjacket wants to focus on in your thread (more on s&s threads later).
ABOUT GETTING A STRAITJACKET
    getting a straitjacket means that you're interested in refining a certain skill or even learning a new one related to writing and/or role-playing. you will be assigned to a surgeon, a mentor in the same or higher group than yours, and they will help you out with whatever it is you wanted to work on through role-playing and possibly critique given in your s&s thread.
S&S THREADS
    s&s threads are very similar to threads found in the "plotting and discussion" forum. you will discuss with your partner what kind of role-play you want to do, exchange contacts, and decide on how you want to go about working on whatever skill you are focusing on. you may decide to post occasional critiques in your thread or do it over im or do something even less formal that doesn't involve critique at all. it's all up to you and what you think will work best. for clarification, s&s threads can be posted in this forum. you post your own thread, so you don't need to wait around for the staff to do it.
APPLYING

you may apply as both a surgeon or a straitjacket. please try to see what other people are looking for and/or offering when you make your application. the more you list, the easier it is to pair you up with someone quickly.


SIGN ON TO THE MEDICAL STAFF: SURGEONS
reply in this thread
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[b]NAME[/B] what you are usually called in the cbox
[B]GROUP[/B]
[b]SKILLS[/B] any writing strengths you have and are willing to help others with
[b]AMOUNT[/B] state if you are alright with being paired up more than once (ie: having several straitjackets) and how many times
[b]ANYTHING ELSE?[/B] contact info or any other notes


GET ADMITTED TO THE ASYLUM: STRAITJACKETS
reply in this thread
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[b]NAME[/B] what you are usually called in the cbox
[B]GROUP[/B]
[b]SKILLS TO IMPROVE[/B] the writing skills, genre, or tense you want to work on
[b]AMOUNT[/B] state if you are alright with being paired up more than once (ie: having several surgeons) and how many times
[b]ANYTHING ELSE?[/B] contact info or any other notes



SUGGESTED TOPICS FOR SKILLS

a new genre (such as steampunk), genders, sexuality, different tenses, diction, experimenting with syntax, pacing, physical descriptions, point of view (first person, third person, etc.), character development, dialogue, settings, world creation (usually for fantasy or sci-fi)


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erato
Posted: Sep 6 2009, 07:01 PM


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AVAILABLE SURGEONS


cycle two to begin soon

PATIENT WAITING LIST

cycle two to begin soon
SURGEONS AND STRAITJACKETS



SURGEON & STRAITJACKET

CEL & VICKIE
ZEN & SARAH.
PRIMA & ZEN
DUSTY & LEXIRA
ALANA & RAY
RAY & ALANA
ALANA & PRIMA
RAY & DUSTY





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iscariot
Posted: Sep 8 2009, 02:18 AM



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NAME Cel
GROUP Neurosis
SKILLS dialogue, character development, third person, character diversity (without going overboard)
AMOUNT Yes; I can handle 2. Maybe 3, depending on which skills.
ANYTHING ELSE? The best way to reach me is on my MSN - cellie-ruru@hotmail.com

NAME Cel
GROUP Neurosis
SKILLS TO IMPROVE world creation/setting
AMOUNT I'd like to just have one, please. :3
ANYTHING ELSE? MSN - cellie-ruru@hotmail.com


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Posted: Sep 8 2009, 10:27 AM



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NAME Sarah
GROUP Mania
SKILLS TO IMPROVE First person, dialogue, physical description, active and passive voice, experimenting with syntax
AMOUNT No more than three.
ANYTHING ELSE? AIM- rosieposie51095@aol.com (Email works best)
gothiczenobia
Posted: Sep 8 2009, 11:47 PM



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NAME Zen
GROUP Mania
SKILLS Character descriptions, setting descriptions.
AMOUNT I will be pretty chill with however many.
ANYTHING ELSE? PM me, AIM (GothicZenobia)

NAME Zen
GROUP Mania
SKILLS TO IMPROVE First person, reduction of sentence fragments.
AMOUNT One for each thing, I suppose.
ANYTHING ELSE? PM me, AIM (GothicZenobia)


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Posted: Sep 10 2009, 05:53 AM



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NAME prima
GROUP syndrome
SKILLS syntax, tenses, overall grammar
AMOUNT one at a time, multiple is fine
ANYTHING ELSE? MSN: emmaline.love@hotmail.com



NAME prima
GROUP syndrome
SKILLS TO IMPROVE male perspective, character development, realism
AMOUNT any and all, I'm just happy to have help
ANYTHING ELSE? MSN: emmaline.love@hotmail.com


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Posted: Sep 10 2009, 08:46 AM



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NAME alana
GROUP neurosis
SKILLS first person perspective, present tense, male perspective, character development (particularly flawed/demented characters), realism, grammar, diction
AMOUNT i don't mind being paired up more than once, but i can't take on more than two or three.
ANYTHING ELSE? aim - the canopy glow. msn - angst.rabbit@hotmail.com. e-mail - angstrabbit@gmail.com.

NAME alana
GROUP neurosis
SKILLS TO IMPROVE writing in second person, pacing
AMOUNT only once for now.
ANYTHING ELSE? aim - the canopy glow. msn - angst.rabbit@hotmail.com. e-mail - angstrabbit@gmail.com


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HOLD THEIR BRIDES
Anna-Lexira
Posted: Sep 11 2009, 03:04 AM



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NAME lexira
GROUP syndrome
SKILLS TO IMPROVE integrating physical descriptions, run-on sentences and fragments.
AMOUNT one surgeon at a time please. college is already time-consuming enough as things are.
ANYTHING ELSE? contact via anna-lexira@live.com or xxheavenhelpusxx@hotmail.com


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Posted: Sep 11 2009, 10:56 PM



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NAME vickie
GROUP neurosis
SKILLS TO IMPROVE character development, fleshing out physical descriptions, creating realistic enviroments
AMOUNT one?
ANYTHING ELSE? aim: deservingwings email:omgitsvickster@gmail.com



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Posted: Sep 11 2009, 11:57 PM



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NAME dusty
GROUP dementia
SKILLS platonic relationships, integrating descriptions, active/passive, run-ons/fragments.
AMOUNT two tops.
ANYTHING ELSE? aim: dustyfairytale

NAME dusty
GROUP dementia
SKILLS TO IMPROVE firstperson, character development/realistic weirdthings, love to learn somethin' steampunk/in that vein.
AMOUNT two tops
ANYTHING ELSE? aim: dustyfairytale


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erato
Posted: Sep 14 2009, 12:45 AM


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UPDATED
    we were able to pair just about everyone up,
    please post back here to confirm you have
    seen the new pairings. that way we can clear
    out the posts and get started on a new waiting list


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iscariot
Posted: Sep 15 2009, 12:31 AM



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I understand! :3 Heya, Vickeh~


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Prima
Posted: Sep 15 2009, 03:08 AM



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Got it, thanks!
Can't wait to get started with Zen and Alana (:
I'm going to add you two right now (Zen, I have AIM too, I just didn't want to post it up here).


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Posted: Sep 15 2009, 11:12 AM



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all good. =D


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Anna-Lexira
Posted: Sep 15 2009, 02:23 PM



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read and understood capt'n! (:


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